Substance Divisions

Today was a revisionist and writing anew day. We had one good, strong scene to revise, and a bridge scene to create from the air, which is where most of the new material comes from. Then, another good strong scene. Then, all of the custody hearing, from thin air.

At any rate, a small word addition today.

20,937 / 80,000 (26.2%)

And...

first third is establishing the conflict, second third is Esme's trial, and third third is Errol's trial.

Give or take, roughly.

Write on, tired writer. You must work tomorrow. A lot.

Catherine