Notes from the Revision Cave

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Hulk Hercules: Watch Bianca and Tony learn about that most amazing of robots, the Hephaubot. Come on, Henson! Make this film! You want lots of interesting Greek doodads built by Hephaustus.

Scene Count:

14 / 37 (37.8%)

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Substance of Shadows: One of my favorite chapters, The Four Corners. I’ve divided the Witness and the Four Corners into two chapters. Milo comes off very well in this chapter. I intend to make him shine more in the prep and buff up what he does in the trial.

190 / 387 (49.1%)

Catherine

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