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Okay, true believers. We begin the mad dash of writing 50K this month on the troll novel. We begin the troll novel with 13,461 words. We will need to add 1615 words per day to make our count of an additional 50K. It's my hope to completely lay the pipe for Part One (the teen part) and begin Part Two (the college student part). At the end of the month, I should have around 61K.

Have I mentioned I really like writing Old Nick? Yeah? Well, for the record again, I do. The adult troll/Nick scene will need some polishing, but we'll get there. We also wrote the missing cow scene. Remember, milk is important in Norwegian folklore!

Tonight's word count meter, then.

15091 / 90000 words. 17% done!

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If you need to giggle loop your day (Coupling reference, anyone?), Dr. Squeaky recommends Two Vampires and a Panel Discussion in the latest issue of Drops of Crimson, edited by the ever hard-working J. Lee Moffat. It's sort of a tribute to my life as the long-suffering wife of a Hammer horror fan, among other things.

There's some other good stories there as well if your UF buttons need pushed. I particularly enjoyed Sea Devil by Kenneth Mark Hoover. And I have to appreciate the ending of The Bus Stop by Gary J. Beharry. Teenagers. They'll make more...

At any rate, enjoy!

Catherine

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Dr. Squeaky managed to wing her way through two and a half hours of academic schmoozing about Hulk Hercules, although, quite frankly, my voice is fried now. Here's a typical conversation.

Visitor: Tell me what you did for your project.
Dr. Squeaky: I was approached by Cats Curious Press to write a series of children's books about mythological gods in modern times.
Visitor: (Begins to grin). That sounds like fun.
Dr. Squeaky: It was! The only parameters I was given was that it should be a middle grade/YA book, and the title had to be Hulk Hercules: Professional Wrestler.
Visitor: (Broad grin) That's wonderful!
Dr. Squeaky: It was! I even went to Chicago to interview wrestlers.

It was fun. I talked about writing a MG fantasy in my cartoony voice, and it all worked. There's some talk about a Kirkwood book signing, and lots of enthusiasm about getting the books for kids and grandkids. All in all, a very successful session. With rotating truffles. And citrusy shrimps.

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While waiting for the gig, I completed around a page of Death by Drowning, which seems to be coming out like Athena, mostly fully formed from my head. Now, I'm spending the rest of my night coughing and relaxing, feeling good about the whole author thing.

See you tomorrow. I predict more pantomime teaching and a return to Decorah.

Catherine

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You know, when you are really sick, everything else you've had before and cranked about makes you feel like a hypochondriac. :) The doctors are having me do laryngitis the old fashioned way--I have a prescription for ZPack, the cannon of antibiotics, but I'm not to use it unless my temperature spikes. Which it has not. So we struggle valiantly onward, sniffling, speaking squeakily, and occasionally giving ourself a buzz with codeine impregnated cough syrup.

Generally, I am a very charismatic and energetic presenter. The Minnie Mouse voice that laryngitis has left me with means that I will have to rely on other virtues to talk about the book. There will be a lot of whispering and pointing today. It is what it is. Classes will also be cut to the bare bones. What questions do you have? Here are some skeletal instructions. Live long and prosper.

I am itching to get back to my manuscript, and have some hopes of doing that tonight. Absence makes the heart grow fonder.

Some quick other things that I should mention before I try to stumble through some work:

I read Michael Jasper's The Wannoshay Cycle. It's very, very good. I am not an SF reader by nature, but MAN, that was something. The premise: The Wannoshay crash land on earth. Humans and Wannoshay negotiate each other. The execution: a psychological ensemble piece with engaging aliens and humans. I'll be looking for more of Michael's books. He writes with a delicate touch, but a sturdy follow through.

I've just begun Dream Angus by Alexander McCall Smith, which is a gentle juxtaposition of Celtic myth and Scottish short story.

On Monday, I took a look at Eisenstein's Ivan the Terrible. Stalin ultimately exiled Eisenstein for part 2, which I have yet to see, but part 1 is laced throughout with propaganda and dramatic posing.

A less patrician offering? Okay. Last night, The Man (TM) and I watched Caprica. It was fine. Teenage Zoey is spooky, but I'm not sure about the Tauran Mafia overtones. Overall, I was satisfied.

Right. Wish me luck. I'm off to make some hot tea, check a couple of stray papers, and basically piddle about until 2ish.

Catherine

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The Itis

Apr. 28th, 2009 04:26 pm
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Or, really, laryngitis. Bryon and I came back from Minneapolis, me with a cough. A trip to the doctor's revealed that I had laryngitis and the beginnings of bronchitis. So I've been taking it easy the last two days, and hope to be back in the saddle at work tomorrow.

We'll probably skip Blood this week, as I have an Endowed Chair presentation about Hulk Hercules to focus on tomorrow. I'll croak through it.

At any rate, back to being AWOL.

Catherine

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Villains

Apr. 24th, 2009 08:20 am
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Am I wrong? Do you notice a definite lack of villains in most books? Modern writing uses multi-faceted characters who are morally ambiguous. I don't want a return to the melodramatic days of mustache twirling, but I find myself looking for villains, and finding my examples are more classic than not.

What makes a good villain? Here's an examination of six villains that have crossed my path, and why I think they're good villains.

1. Steerpike from Gormenghast. Steerpike is an abused boy from the kitchens who shamelessly manipulates his way into a variety of powerful positions, and then starts abusing that power. Hungry for more power and prestige, eventually he begins to kill for it. He also has a ferocious temper that makes him avenge what he perceives as slights.

Why does Steerpike work? He has humble origins, he has moments of humanities, the escalation of his deeds are so gradual we see him slip little by little, and by the time he goes completely mad, a small part of us wants him to succeed in contrast to his enemies. Make no mistake. He's got to go down, and he's evil. He's fascinating.

Peake takes 12 pages to kill Steerpike in my version of the book. A worthy villain gets a worthy death.

2. Dr. Doom.

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Dr. Doom comes from the hokey period of Marvel Comics. In general, I've been pleased with his portrayal in modern times. He is crazy and selfish, but when it comes to running his country, you can always count on him to do what he thinks is right for Latveria, in a really stern father kind of way. Doom is deeply flawed in so many ways, including in his irrational hatred of his rival Reed Richards. However, you can count on Doom to do what he says he will do, especially if you have the word of Doom.

There is no moral grayness about Doom. What you see is what you get.

3. Cardinal Richelieu

Of the characters on this list, the Cardinal comes the closest to that modern interpretation of villain as multi-faceted character. There's a reversal in The Three Musketeers that makes Richelieu almost seem a better man than the King (I believe he is), but his motivations make him the villain of the piece. Make no mistake. Richelieu is in this for France, but mostly he's in it for himself.

Most of the adaptations of the Musketeer films make Richelieu into a caricature of himself. I'm still trying to block out the Tim Curry portrayal from the last Disney effort! Brrr! Still, you've got to admire Richelieu's abilities to scheme and manipulate, and you've got to admire D'Artagnan's ability to save the day in the face of it.

4. The Operative from Serenity.

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Ah, Firefly! I could count the ways I despise your flimsy writing and your unsympathetic characters, but I would digress. Instead, I will praise the main villain of Serenity, the Operative. I admit that I like the Operative mostly because he wants to kill the crew of the Serenity, but there's more than that.

The Operative see the evil he does as a necessary evil in an imperfect world. He doesn't get off on killing little assassin girls, but he knows he must sacrifice himself to keep civilization safe, and he'll do it. He has embraced his role as monster, and will do whatever it takes to keep the world safe and sound from the threat of government experiments gone aglay (a little Scottish for ya).

That's cool. He's one scary guy.

5. Narnia Witches. The White Witch, of course, has a ruthless agenda and an unfeeling heart. She symbolically sacrifices the good in the world when she does Aslan in. I love her beauty juxtaposed with her temper. Also, I truly enjoy her sister the Green Witch, and the way she enchants Rillian to her own purpose. Yeah, they're some heartless, manipulative women who take charge of their own desire for power.

Those are my top five. I'd love to hear where you've read your villains, and who works for you.

Here are some villains I think don't work from fairly popular fantasy.

Voldemort: The threat is coming! It's so bad you can't speak his name! He's really bad! And...then he gets here, and he doesn't do much beyond that really scary scene at the end of book 4. And then he gets played by Ralph Fiennes with a squished nose and a bald cap. Meh. Somehow, I want a partial refund...

Sauron: Sure. The war is bad. The ring is bad. The orcs are bad. But all he does is glare, ya know?

At any rate, I would love to hear from you. What makes a good villain? An effective one? Who are your favorites?

Catherine

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The subconscious is an interesting thing. I'll spin for a while, and write a lot of words that I won't use. While I'm doing that, I seem to be putting the real story together somewhere underneath my consciousness. Then when I revisit the scene, or reorganize my outline, the work the subconscious has done comes out. I may end up discarding a great deal I've done before, but this feels right.

Tonight I did a great deal of organizing and shuffling things about. I decided on some terminology. Mortals, not humans.
Veridian for the mortal lands. And, my most Norwegian decision this evening, Elves instead of Sidhe.

That's right, Tolkien fans. If Elves were good enough for old J.R. R. , they're good enough for me!

Actually, though, the decision is a little deeper than that. Sidhe is a Celtic word. The Norwegians do call these creatures elves. We want our folklore to be cohesive. Except when we don't. (I won't tell you about that, until I get to the godmothers, however.)

13461 / 90000 words. 15% done!

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This will feel a bit like sugar in the raw, but here's my favorite material from tonight. I like Sigfried and Sigurda as they begin to take shape. My goal with Sigurda is to make her the less emotive, the one you must guess at. I need to ramp up Sigfried's character as I write more, but I want him to develop more on his own, than me forcing him. Then I'll rewrite what I think is necessary.

Sigfried’s clear eyes flashed. His sister Sigurda crouched down near the trees, examining ruts in the frozen ground. They were mirrors of each other, both of their hair ice white, their eyes the sky blue of deep winter depths, their skin unnaturally pale. Where they walked in veridian, frost followed them. Sigurda place a hand on the tree to steady herself as she rose, and she studied him for a moment. Her breath did not cloud as she spoke, as they were colder than the weather.

Sigfried’s handiwork lay beneath him. A large troll was splayed on the ground, unconscious. It had been a challenging battle, but in the end, the quickness of an elf proved much better than the strength of a troll. Sigfried guessed the troll was a young, inexperienced one at best. “I thought they were supposed to be impressive.”

“Are we feeling overconfident?” asked Sigurda. While her expression remained frozen, a smirk edged her voice.

Sigfried sheathed his clear, flat blade. Hers hung from his belt like a thick icicle. “I defeated him rather easily,” he said, smugly.

“We chose here to exit for a reason.” Sigurda knelt over the troll’s body, and he melted. Rock sank into the field, root and tree and stone became one with its origins. “He’ll sleep,” said Sigurda. “By the time he digs himself out, we’ll be far away.”

Sigfried watched the border mists twist and buckle. A wind fanned his cloak behind him. “All the patrols must know something is happening.”

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It's not about writing, but it is about Iowa, so it's fair game at the Tamago.

I'm proud of my state, and I want to share this NY Times Op-Ed about Iowa family values.

Quietly progressive, and getting back to the fields.

Catherine

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We had a lovely dinner with friends, and then I came home to some work emails that couldn't wait. Pshaw! That means that writing wasn't what I wanted tonight.

BUT we did do something. I outlined the fight scene and the next scene. Here's hoping for more output tomorrow.

13008 / 90000 words. 14% done!

Sometimes I see the appeal of not having another job. I also see the appeal of not having a job that follows you home. Bleah.

Catherine

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Welcome to National Poetry Month on the Drollerie Blog Tour.

My entry is up at Anna's blog, and here's Anna's entry right here!

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Other folks on this month's blog tour will be telling you about how poetry has influenced their writing. Me, I'm not as much of a poetry reader, with one particular exception: I'm a sucker for sonnets. I've been known to write a few myself, particularly when members of my favorite bands are the topic of discussion; I'm particularly proud of "Ode to the Hair of Alan The Doyle".

But when it comes to influencing my actual writing, I was hard pressed to make a connection. Oh sure, I could have told you all about "Andris and Larain", my first stab at a fantasy-based epic poem. Aside from that, though, and the periodic fangirly bursts of verse I put out every so often, poetry doesn't make much of a dent.

Until I got to thinking more about Faerie Blood, the characters in it, and in particular about how the old Warder of Seattle, back when she was a fresh young Warder of Seattle, had a bit of poetry come into her life.

Hope y'all enjoy this glimpse of Millicent meeting the man she'll one day marry, and thanks again for reading all our posts!

Downtown Seattle, January, 1953

Three in the morning was no time for a girl to be out on the streets, especially the streets that ran under the half-constructed viaduct over Alaskan Way. But then, that was why I had Butch. The shotgun's weight in the holster beneath my coat was a comfort; so was the thrum of the city's energies, rising up into me right out of the ground with every step I took. My nerves were on edge, twitchy as a long-tailed cat in a room full of rocking chairs, but I was ready for whatever might leap out of the night.

I wasn't ready, though, for a ragged voice bellowing somewhere in the darkness ahead of me.

"Oh, I have slipped the surly bonds of earth... done a hundred things you have not dreamed of..."

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Industrious author is industrious. This marks the end of the classification of my Decorah photos.

The Opera House at the Winnishiek Hotel

Striking pictures of Phelps Park

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Phelps Park looks troll built to me. The stone work is wonderful and interesting. Nick's first scene is here. The Widow lives in the woods down by the river.

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Meanwhile in writing...Look! Fourteen percent! Yes!

12942 / 90000 words. 14% done!

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Here are some pictures of Decorah, Iowa. A fictional version of Decorah is the setting for The Winter the Troll Danced with Old Nick, so I took several atmospheric pictures.

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This is one of my favorites. You too can get a tattoo worthy of the Valkyries!

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I know that there are several people who are looking at taking the urban out of their urban fantasy, even though I imagine UF will always be called UF. I wanted a setting with a different flavor, and the Norwegian immigrant town of Decorah seemed like a good setting for what I needed.

We have a couple of galleries left to post: the Opera House at the Winneshiek Hotel, and some interesting shots of Phelps Park.

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I will have a story in the April issue of Drops of Crimson--Two Vampires and a Panel Discussion, another humorous vampire adventure, this time starring vampire killer Reginald Rath and his sidearm-toting sidekick Mark Maxwell. I'll link when it comes out in about a week and a half.

Hmmm...maybe there is a market for humorous vampires...

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Feeling like you need a little writing kick start? This works for some. I'm considering it, because I'm a sucker for deadlines and reporting to others...

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See you later with some photos and word count.

Catherine

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A meaningful gap in my fantasy education was the books of Mervyn Peake, particularly Gormenghast. Gap closed!

Superficially, there could be a comparison between what Peake does and what Tolkien does in The Lord of the Rings. Most people will tell you that both books are masterpieces of world building.

Tolkien colored fantasy for around fifty years, as many authors tried to emulate his world building. Although I don't want to digress into Tolkien's work this entry, I've always thought that Tolkien's story was primarily about character in a rich setting.

Gormenghast is the opposite of Tolkien. It appears to be about characters, but the story overall is the effect of the castle on its denizens. The characters are sketches against their lives of tradition, duty, and neglect, all centered on Gormenghast, which shapes them.

Should current authors of fantasy read Gormenghast? What would they gain by doing so?

Gormenghast is an exercise in gothic examination of place and its influence, freely exploring the macabre and the dark in its characters. These people are deeply flawed, and it is more the atmosphere and place that causes them to act than any other thing. Peake seems to be engaging not only in epic story telling, but also in a commentary on the nature of humanity.

Titus Groan is the first book in the series. It is dry, but necessary ground work. Gormenghast is Peake's true endeavor. I recommend that folks who want to cheat could use Titus Groan for a reference, or maybe go back to the first book once questions have given them motivation to read it.

At some point in the future, I want to write more about Peake's villain Steerpike, who dominates the first two novels as mad genius.

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Spent writing time getting Blood around, and began to recapture what I lost from the other night. Some day I will have more that 13 percent, I tell you!

12013 / 90000 words. 13% done!

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Since Mark Twain's Daughter came home again, I sent it back out. To here. Cerulean Rain looks to be an experimental literary site that specializes in psychological stories. Since the story's a little off beat, we'll see if it can find a home there.

Meanwhile, you might enjoy checking out the e-zine for its beautiful art, poetry, and prose.

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It's not up yet, because I've been catching up on work. That said, you will soon be able to find the latest installment of Blood is Thicker than Water.

It's nice to be back from Denver. It'll even be nicer when I get my voice back. Con voice strain. It can happen to you.

Catherine

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This month, the Drollerie blog tour deals with the topic of poetry. I'm happy to host Ann Korra'ti next Tuesday, and I'd like to introduce you to her.

Anna has a technical side, and a literary side. Apparently, there's also music. Here's her witty bio from her website. She has a wide variety of interests as well.

In regards to Drollerie, Faerie Blood comes out early this year. Here's a little teaser.

Look for Anna here in the environs of the 21st. As turn around is fair play, I'll actually be posting over at Anna's place.

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Something that hasn't happened for a long time...I'm not sleeping well. Harumph! I need that sleep for a long travel day tomorrow.

An unfortunate event. I lost all my words and organization from this evening's writing session. I don't mind the words so much. They were crap, and it was more like pre-writing, so I should be able to go forward tomorrow. I do mind the organization. I managed to reproduce most of that, but I must admit that I will be A LOT more careful about saving. Scrivener's eaten my words twice, and this time, I was cautious enough to take precautions. It's a bit of a mystery.

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Since I'm up, I thought I would finish the Vesterheim galleries. Mind, I still have information about Phelps Park, an opera house, and the town in general to talk about, but that's for another night.

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The above picture is a wedding couple, because you want to see how the crown from the last entry is worn. Under here, lots of cool woodwork and craft.

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Look at that beautiful example of Norwegian craftsmanship. The wedding crown is just one of the many beautiful things that Norwegians make out of metal. Every woman gets to wear the crown on her wedding day, and some of the crowns are passed from generation to generation.

Other examples of clothing and metal work are found in my clothing and metal work gallery.

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Back to writing! I wrote crap, but as promised, I laid some pipe. I also organized some more details in the story. Next, we slowly and methodically describe tonight's sketchy scenes. I'll be in route to Denver tomorrow, but I'll still take a stab at doing some writing sometime.

Notice how the word count isn't changing...whackity whack!

12304 / 90000 words. 14% done!

Happy writing to you all.

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Well, of course, you've seen Susan Boyle's performance from Britain's Got Talent. You should also read this journal about it entitled. Susan Boyle: Why Dreams Matter.

It's an opportunity for us all to reflect on our endeavors as artists, and how far we go with dreams. I'd like to thank Peg Kerr for pointing it out to me.

Catherine

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Friend Julie K. Rose moves forward to an Amazon Semi-Finalist position with The Pilgrim Glass. Wish her luck as she moves toward the top 3 on May 15th. Better yet, write her a review.

Catherine

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