Notes from Another Revision Cave

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Like pulling teeth today, we have some new words for Hulk Hercules. I have the foundations for the fall festival scene and Leo asking Diana out. Both are sketchy. More importantly, I have figured out the Dalton/Bianca/Tim plot, and have integrated a couple of place holders to get that into the story. I did some plotting and rearranging. Next session I’ll buff up those two scenes. So the Herc-o-meter hasn’t really budged, but the overall percentage is smaller.

15 / 41 (36.6%)

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In Substance, Chapter 8 has been divided and trimmed. I think it’s full of melodrama and transitional events. Next up: Chapter 9, which requires Milo-lization.

261 / 386 (67.6%)

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I also updated my time lines and lists. This helps me refresh my brain.

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