did i jstu see a female villain or did someone step otu of a hauntedcastle itno yoru hands? whoever the hell she is it seem as if she is glad to be in yoru athorly hadns and do her part in the story. oen of these days i'll end up having a weak spot for this type of character. whoa.
adn owl creepign into someone's soul? adn ifeel stupid for jsut now noticign egyption deity names. am i remmberign right by the way when i sya this ordeal of errol win that hall wit ha demon (that was for myour nano adventure remember) was that a sphinx? i can't say anything aboutthe writignitslef except i read this and the details liek the owl the superb tric kwhere everyoen but the reader knows what's going on jstu make me tchant 'what is this??" I hope this won't even land in a slush pile. you might not hit the nail liek soem others did (some of those withotu knowing it in advance) but yo uwil lhit *some kind of* nail and find a notche.
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Date: 2007-09-02 01:53 pm (UTC)adn owl creepign into someone's soul?
adn ifeel stupid for jsut now noticign egyption deity names. am i remmberign right by the way when i sya this ordeal of errol win that hall wit ha demon (that was for myour nano adventure remember) was that a sphinx?
i can't say anything aboutthe writignitslef except i read this and the details liek the owl the superb tric kwhere everyoen but the reader knows what's going on jstu make me tchant 'what is this??"
I hope this won't even land in a slush pile. you might not hit the nail liek soem others did (some of those withotu knowing it in advance) but yo uwil lhit *some kind of* nail and find a notche.