i think your'e usinga godo set of tricks to pull the readers in. none of that liflaf marketing what-can-i-di-to-make-this-sell-like-hp. i'm glad you've bene able to compelley pull this otu of the hp verse (and ialso see it was great playgroudn to testthis-oen out.) it's jsut so damn godo already, i'm aboutto say if you wont' fidn an agent for this-one i'll throttle the mall. i mean come on! if this ever comes out and hasa blurb comparing itto any wllknown classic that'ssuposto make the readerthink 'ah if it's liek soandso it might be good' *buys*. i mean forget it. i don't knwo when you foudn your own unique writing voice or narrative toneor whatever it's called but yay. it's liek hearing a singer some years afterh e finally stepepd out of the immitation box and be used totheir own sound.
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Date: 2007-07-04 09:51 pm (UTC)i think your'e usinga godo set of tricks to pull the readers in. none of that liflaf marketing what-can-i-di-to-make-this-sell-like-hp. i'm glad you've bene able to compelley pull this otu of the hp verse (and ialso see it was great playgroudn to testthis-oen out.)
it's jsut so damn godo already, i'm aboutto say if you wont' fidn an agent for this-one i'll throttle the mall. i mean come on! if this ever comes out and hasa blurb comparing itto any wllknown classic that'ssuposto make the readerthink 'ah if it's liek soandso it might be good' *buys*. i mean forget it. i don't knwo when you foudn your own unique writing voice or narrative toneor whatever it's called but yay. it's liek hearing a singer some years afterh e finally stepepd out of the immitation box and be used totheir own sound.