Notes from the Revision Cave

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So, today’s glamorous word counts!

Hulk Hercules: Began work on chapter 3, revising an interpersonal scene between Bianca and Tony, and set up the wrestlers potluck. Next session will be Nonna’s retelling of the Augean Stables.

6 / 38 (15.8%)

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Substance of Shadows: The beginning of a new chapter. Not too much wrong with the Ma’at stuff. Next, a big revision: the meeting between Stephanas and Professor Borgia, which needs quite a bit of work. I’m also trying to think about whether to insert the Hamwich scene before the Atreus meets Enid scene, or after, which will serve the story best. We’ll let that stew.

58 / 376 (15.4%)

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