Notes from the Revision Cave

[cathschaffstump]

So, today’s glamorous word counts!

Hulk Hercules: Began work on chapter 3, revising an interpersonal scene between Bianca and Tony, and set up the wrestlers potluck. Next session will be Nonna’s retelling of the Augean Stables.

6 / 38 (15.8%)

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Substance of Shadows: The beginning of a new chapter. Not too much wrong with the Ma’at stuff. Next, a big revision: the meeting between Stephanas and Professor Borgia, which needs quite a bit of work. I’m also trying to think about whether to insert the Hamwich scene before the Atreus meets Enid scene, or after, which will serve the story best. We’ll let that stew.

58 / 376 (15.4%)

Originally published at Writer Tamago. You can comment here or there.

Comments

[erised1810.livejournal.com]

i was wondering. have you saved any older versions? jsut in case you need to putstuff bac ki nthat soemoenelse wanted ou to cut out or that you decided to snip? or is this the dumbest question i coudl have possibly asked an author...

[awelkin.livejournal.com]

That's not a dumb question at all.

I *have* kept most of those scenes in an alternative version of the book, so I can liberally put them back.

Catherine