Stinky Cows and Horses, Wizards, Etc
Sep. 28th, 2008 04:18 pmArm on ice, but here’s today’s count for Hulk Hercules.
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7 / 38
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The Augean Stables tale was pretty broad and fun to tell, and so it required little revision. Next session, however, will be pretty much brand new: introducing Hera and Libby. Hercules may get all my attention next session. I also want to get Tony and Bianca back to the school and get a Bianca POV scene before I start in on the Herculean love triangle. So, we have some new tents to pitch.
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Now for Substance. I added in two old scenes and polished up Stephan’s questions about the curses. Next session I will go back over that section in a smoothing rewrite, and move into the chapter that introduces the Hamwiches in earnest, as well as polish Atreus’ custody battle for his children. I’ve almost reached 75 pages for the resend, but of course, I must revise the entire novel first.
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67 / 384
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Catherine
Originally published at Writer Tamago. You can comment here or there.
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Date: 2008-09-29 05:44 pm (UTC)i don't know. i've stopped thinkign abour rocks lately. it's jstu about watering plants and having te whole universe f yoru story spring to life. if that hulk book comes out i hope i'll be a translater adn can be contracted to tur nthis this thign in dutch. i think our kids will love it to bits too.
and as for substance, i did the nay or yay thing earlier and yes mummy i'll plunge into the erm thing you ocne sent me by way of sort ofsniffing at what your'e breathing into it right now. and for your arm i'l just say ha! because whatever it was that wanted this to hinder you, well...no siree :P