Notes from the Revision Cave

[cathschaffstump]

Finally! Today I fell into the scenes I wrote in Hulk Hercules. I see the need to check in with Tony and Bianca before I write El Toro, so I will add in some more new material. We are now longer than the first rough draft.

Here’s the scene measure of the Herc-o-meter.

20 / 43 (46.5%)

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Substance: Dangerously close to the finish. Heavily revising, activating, and trimming Errol’s trial. Trying to sharpen everyone’s personality.

343 / 387 (88.6%)

And that’s enough for tonight.

Catherine

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