Deep Deep Read Begins and Snippet!

Getting the real loosy goosy stuff out of the carpet now, and making it sleek.

Here's a snippet from the prologue, which we edited through page 7 tonight (which is a slight miracle this week, I have to tell you!)

( Erasmus and Balthazar )

Well! It's certainly better paced, and more lean. Now, to do this with another 408 pages or so. :) Yup, JUST like writing the thesis. ;P

Catherine