Synopsis 2

This synopsis is more character-driven, which the last one probably should have been. Would this make you want to read the book?

Nasma has found a man in the desert, now treasure of the Storm Sisters. What she doesn't know is the man has lost a king, fragmented in the mists, one part of the king's soul with trolls who are searching for the rest. She doesn't know that the man has left a mistress, the new queen of the Sidhe, who loves him and hates him. She doesn't know that the mistress's husband will journey through her desert, to cement an alliance with the dark forces that border her land. Nasma, knowing none of these things, has decided she loves the man, and will protect her treasure with all of the force the Storm Sisters can gather. The treasure, Rohren the Avenger, has other ideas.

I'd like a good site for information about writing outlines for books, if those of you who send off proposals know of one. Of course, I'll be investigating things myself.

Catherine

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