Chapter 11 and Errol’s Trial Revised!

[cathschaffstump]

With that little multi-layered task done, I have one more chapter to go.

I’ve decided to keep the poison plot from the old book for this one, but reject the break up plot, as that seems to happen a bit too soon and would seem manufactured in this version.

So, the new version of Substanceshould be done fairly soon, and come in at around 70K words.

Closer than I thought I’d get tonight. Pleased.

Catherine

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